Make your tone pitch perfect
How we use a consistent voice and an appropriate tone.
Applying a particular tone of voice on top of plain English is what makes us sound HS2.
Our tone of voice expresses our three HS2 personality traits:
- neighbourly;
- can-do; and
- visionary.
All neighbourly
three traits should always be present in our writing. But you should highlight a trait or put less emphasis on it – dial the traits up or down – depending on who you are talking to and what you want to achieve.
HS2 will affect millions of people – communities, businesses, stakeholders, the public... We need to write and speak in a down-to- earth way which demonstrates understanding, warmth, common sense and respect.
You should always:
- express your ideas in friendly terms not corporate language – so, use ‘we’ for ‘HS2 Ltd’ and ‘you’ for your audience;
- make sure you write for your audience, reflecting their knowledge and attitude; and
- demonstrate we always listen and respond – and aren’t afraid to acknowledge mistakes.
- Neighbourly writing shows empathy.
What ‘neighbourly’ isn’t | What ‘neighbourly’ is: |
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HS2 Ltd is carrying out an examination of noise mitigation measures in the proximity of the tunnel portals. | We’re looking at how we can reduce noise around our tunnels. |
HS2 Ltd will communicate with property-owners impacted by HS2 about the commencement of major works civils contracts along the line of route. | We’ll tell you about the start of construction works for HS2. |
Can-do
Using ‘can-do’ language shows that we’re confident in our abilities. We’ll do what we say we’ll do. It helps build trust, pride and belief in HS2.
You should always:
- demonstrate expertise by explaining complex issues simply, so they’re easy and quick to grasp;
- use unambiguous language and give details, so it’s clear who’s responsible for what, when;
- avoid jargon and explain any essential technical language (e.g. use of brackets, blow-out boxes, a glossary);
- make your sentences and paragraphs short; keep to the point and ask yourself: ‘Do people need to know this?’; and
- be honest – if we’re getting things wrong, tell people how we’re going to make it right.
What can do isn’t | What can do is |
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If you have any questions or you would like to obtain additional information, you can get in touch with our helpdesk. | Our helpdesk is open 24/7 – ring us on 08081 434 434. |
The hybrid Bill for Phase One of HS2 has completed all stages of the Parliamentary process and received Royal Assent. | The first part of HS2, between the West Midlands and London, is going ahead. |
Visionary
Britain’s new high-speed railway is unparalleled in scope and ambition. It will transform the way we live and work and the way cities and towns connect. We should talk about it in a way that excites about the opportunities HS2 is delivering for everyone. (Remember – if you’re writing for affected communities, it’s important to be empathetic to the disruption they’re experiencing.)
Use your writing to demonstrate our visionary nature by:
- not just focusing on works and impact now, always including the bigger picture of benefits tomorrow;
- showing that we know individual places and care for their development;
- inspire pride in Britain – we’re building the nation’s future, levelling up the UK;
- using vibrant, dynamic language to look beyond today and talk about time and our legacy.
What 'visionary' isn’t | What ‘visionary’ is |
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HS2 Ltd is developing multiple pathways for future skills and careers. | We’re supporting diverse jobs and skills for today and tomorrow. |
HS2 Ltd is modelling rolling stock capability to facilitate a comprehensive experience upgrade for rail users. | We’re using world-leading innovation to set new standards of safety and comfort for passengers, in this century and the next. |